Alterations made along the way- Script, Costume and Structure of Narrative

We have decided to change the storyline so that it is more like an opening than a trailer because too much action was happening. We also decided that we would use a main female character and two other characters in the opening.


New Script-
My name is Emily Stone, I'm not your typical gangster. When I was younger the people I loved were taken from me. I don't know where they went or who took them, all I know was that it was my fault. It was just a bit of fun. I didn't mean to hurt anyone, especially not my family. But like any addiction it took over my life and it still has a hold on me. But that is all about to change, tonight.

New Structure of narrative-
1. Dialogue starts and female character looks up at camera and smiles.
2. Shot of her mum.
3. Shot of her dad.
4. Casino scene, dice rolls on screen.

New costume:

Main female character-

• Jeans
• Convers
• Red scarf
• Black leather jacket
• Jewelery- necklace, rings, earings
• Makeup

Female character-

• Dress
• Jewelery- necklace, earings

Male character-

• Shirt
• Jeans
• Watch

New prop list-

• Pillowcase
• Cards
• Chair
• Casino chips
• Dice